Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Outline for Essay #2

Introduction-
-Education is important (transitioning into the NCLB and College Success Rates)
Thesis-The No Child Left Behind Act has good intentions, but is severely flawed and is damaging our educational system, however, it can be fixed by correcting three big problems.

Paragraph 1- State College Preparedness is Low
-How to fix it.

Paragraph 2- Bad Curriculum
-How to fix it.

Paragraph 3- Bad Funding
-How to fix it

Paragraph 4- Summary of Solution

Conclusion- Combination of Solutions= (name for solution)
-Good intentions combined with these revisions will result in increasing success.